Wednesday, March 26, 2008

Critique

"When you write, my dear,

write either for yourself

or for your audience.

Words are little pictures."

See the clever man?

"You do have talent.

Images. And sense

of rhythmic flow.

But what exactly is

your goal?" Watch

the video: she curls

as if in utero.

"But if you want

to publish"...Yes?

"There's far to go."

RUN AWAY HOME


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